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d Complete the sentences in your own words, e Read the essay again and complete the chart.
according to the essay.

e.g. Celebrities and business executives have left
1 Introduction:
their smartphones to get back the time
a Getting the attention:
they lose because of the smartphones.

1 Students are distracted because they b Thesis statement:
while studying.
2 2 Body:
causes children to feel neglected, insecure and Paragraph I
worthless. a Topic sentence:
3 Our brains have become lazy because

b Examples, facts, quotes or opinions of authorities:
4 Scientists found out that excessive use of
smartphones causes
Paragraph II
a Topic sentence:

b Examples, facts, quotes or opinions of authorities:

To write a coherent essay, you need to make an Paragraph III
outline. Outline is a good way to organise your a Topic sentence:
thoughts. To make an essay outline, follow these
steps: b Examples, facts, quotes or opinions of authorities:

1 Introduction:

a Get the attention of your readers.
3 Conclusion:
b Present your thesis statement.
a Summary :
2 Body:
a State your topic sentences in each b Inspiring sentence or proposition:
paragraph
b Support your ideas with examples, facts,
quotes or opinions of authorities. f Make an outline to write an essay on one of the
c Use linking words to introduce or sequence topics below.
your ideas. • Children under 16 shouldn’t use social

3 Conclusion: networking sites.
• 3D printed tissues and organs will be very
a Summarise your thesis statement. helpful to humanity.
b Write an inspiring sentence or propose a • Technology should be involved in education
solution to end your essay. more.

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